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Pudsey Waterloo

Primary School


This week we are going to be writing the innovated story that we came up with as class and you have looked at it using the story map. 


We are asking you to write it over 3 days and do a section at a time to support you focusing on the quality and content of what is needed in your story. 


Today focus on writing the ending - see the break down of this on the PDF below


Success criteria 


- capital letters and full stops

- story language

- expanded noun phrases

- conjunctions - and, but, so, because, when 

- letter formation 

- exclamation sentence 

- command sentence 

- question sentence 


All of the success criteria are on the word mat - do not forget you can magpie ideas from there and use them in your writing.